Another grey, miserable day. I have sent another reminder to the freelance agent. If nothing comes in by the end of this week I will have to dig out my O level certificates from the garage of my parents' house, demolished about 25 years ago, and start looking for work again. That leaves me this week for a couple of coffee meet-ups with old friends and final, final re-editing of novel 4.
Yesterday I started my re-edit at chapter 42. The first and last chapters are the most important to get right. After hauling the reader in, you've got to try and leave them with all those feelings of satisfaction of a book well read; that they loved the story and the characters so much they want to go back to the beginning and start it all over again. I've also just read in my Writer's Little Helper that agents & editors will often check that chapter out after C1, which would make a lot of sense. Maybe it's just because I haven't done a how-to book for so long, but each one seems to throw up more ideas and this one is full of techniques I've never come across before. Does anybody else use the Flesch Reading Ease tool in Word grammar for pacing? It recommends you split each scene into beg, middle and end. Then put each through the tool to find out its pacing. Then you can see if it's flat, or fizzles off to nothing, and adjust. Then you can do it with whole chapters for the entire story to make sure there are ups and downs and all. I've never paid any attention to the grammar tool, thanks all the same. But am amazed to discover it also winkles out the passive voice for you as well. How does it DO that?
Ooh, Zokutu wordcounter is back. Good... filling it up the joy of my morning.
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